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Religious Studies

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Describe how Jewish women might worship differently to men. (5)

In Judaism men and women have different role and therefore worship differently. Women are naturally more spiritual and don't need guidance. So Jews believe that only men need to wear the tefillin. In the Shema is says that you have to keep God close to your mind and soul. This is interpreted that male Jews wear the tefillin next to their hearts and heads to help them connect with God and become more spiritually focused.
Another reason and way Jewish men and women worship differently is their position in the synagogue. In the orthodox synagogues women sit at the top in the gallery and men sit at the bottom in the centre of the synagogue. This is done to stop men and women from getting distracted from their worship.

Explain why Moses is important in Judaism. [8]

Moses is important in Judaism because God made a covenant with him. Moses was the first in his family to believe in one God. God made a promise to him. God promised him that his followers would be God’s ‘Chosen People’. Moses is important because some Jews believe that they are his descendants and he is the founding father of their religion.

Explain Catholic beliefs about the aims of punishing criminals. [8]

Catholics view the different aims of punishing criminals, as that deterrence is wrong because you could convict the wrong person and once they are dead, you can't bring them back. Also that executing people is the same as murdering, which is why deterrence is wrong, as it's meant to put the criminal off the crime, but innocent people can mistakenly be convicted. However, Christians like the aim of protection (protecting criminals from society), reform (teaching the criminals not to do it again) and retribution (they have to pay for the crime), as all of these and human punishments that do not go against Jesus' teaching that 'eye for eye, tooth for tooth' is not how we should live, and to forgive not seven times but seventy times seven', these are New Testament beliefs/teachings.

From either Catholic Christianity and Judaism or two Christian traditions, explain attitudes towards abortion. [8]

Judaism does permit abortion, however, most Jews would not allow it on demand. If having the baby could harm the Mother or there are other severe circumstances to be considered, then many Jews would allow it. Most Jews believe in pikuash nefesh (saving a life) and the Torah says 'Whoever destroys one life, it is as if he has destroyed the whole world, so Orthodox Jews might still believe that all abortion is wrong.
Catholics believe abortion is wrong in all circumstances, even rape or disability. This is because the Pope says that it is wrong and the Pope's teachings are thought to be infallible.

'Christians should always forgive'. Discuss this statement showing that you have considered more than one point of view (you must refer to religion and belief in your answer). [15]

Christians believe they should always forgive as Jesus said when asked how many times we should forgive, 'not seven times, but seventy times seven times'. This tells Christians they should forgive every time. However, some find this hard; Julie Nicholson, who was a priest at the time her daughter was killed on the London Underground during the attacks and she found herself not being able to forgive the people who had murdered her daughter. As Christians believe that forgiveness is looking past someone's faults, but Julie also believed that the other person had to be there to be forgiven but the people who killed her daughter were dead as they were suicide bombers, and so due to this she stepped down from her role as a priest/vicar because she was telling people to forgive when she couldn't forgive others herself. This shows that Christians don't always forgive.
In conclusion, I believe that Christians should forgive because in the Bible, where most of their beliefs come from, there are many quotes from Jesus and God that Christians should always forgive, so if they don't, they are going against their religion.

The world is ours to do what we like with. (15)
Discuss this statement showing that you have considered more than one point of view.
(You must refer to religious and non-religious beliefs such as those held by Humanists and Atheists, in your answer)

Catholics believe that we should care for the planet for God. This is because they believe that God 'appointed man as ruler over all creation' and that it is their duty to care for the earth (for God).
However, humanists believe that humans should care for the earth for themselves to make us happier. Like Catholics, humanists do believe in preserving the planet, just not for a God but for future generations.
The Pope's 'Laudato Si' says that we should stop treating the earth as we do because we should be stewards to the earth and care for God's creation responsibly. It also says that we should not treat the earth's resources as profit and that we should be grateful of what God left here for us.
Humanists believe that we should preserve the earth and protect it for future generations and to make sure they have a good quality of life ad so that they can enjoy their time on the earth as much as possible.

'You have to go to the synagogue to be a Jew' (15)

Jewish people usually go to a synagogue for services, prayers, community events and sometimes to school. They will try and walk there because on Saturdays they are not allowed to do any work and the synagogue might be quite far away and the walk would be tiring and feel like work. Jews like to go to the synagogue because it means you can be with people who believe what you believe and you can all join in the singing and prayers. Also, their holy books are kept there, so they would want to go and see those. I don’t see the point in going to a synagogue because I am not Jewish, but I expect it is important for them.
On the other hand, you could just pray at home where you have peace and quiet to concentrate and be with family. Jewish people think that family life is important especially on a Friday and Saturday when they celebrate Sabbath.