Something's not quite right
Read the following two sections from narratives. Highlight any errors you find and discuss them with a partner.
If you agree that something is not quite right with the text for any reason, note how you would ‘repair’ the text so it makes clear sense to a reader.
After you have finished a section, click on the link to see if you identified the problems correctly. You can also click on a link to see an improved version to match against your own.