Instructions
In order to successfully express your ideas analytically you must be quite sure that you recognize the differences between 3 kinds of writing:
- Descriptive
- Commentary on meaning
- Critical analysis and evaluation
Our immediate impressions of the character of Gabriel Oak are governed by Hardy’s playful introduction. When he smiles, we are told, his mouth and ears almost join in a clown-like grin which is then amplified by the use of a simile comparing his appearance to the sun and emphasising the warmth, simplicity and benevolence of the character. However, although the playful approach is still evident in Hardy’s use of “rudimentary sketch” as he describes Oak’s features (suggesting something naïve or childlike which might charm readers) there is also a teasing invitation to underestimate the character in light of the strengths and virtues which are revealed later in the passage.
This writing is entirely focused upon HOW Hardy writes and the possible effects upon his readers. It is what is expected at A level and quite distinct from the two examples before it.