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The writer never allowed the tiger to eat “raw flesh” and only gave him a “little” cooked meat each day. He allowed it as much milk as it wanted. When he became too big he gave him a “stout buffalo-leather collar” and he “chained” him to a nearby door.
Even though the response is shorter it skilfully focuses on the 5 key aspects and makes skilful use of quotation.
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